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please help! im stuck!?

Okay, I'm writing a paper for my composition class. I do not know how to end the history of this reality can not make sense, but it is only a draft. Here is the last paragraph. The door creaked open. He could hear the man's unsteady steps, and see a ray of light from his lantern, lit up everything he was red with blood, and I could see the bones of dead deer, cattle, and others use it for living things that I did not want think. This was the end. I heard a roar of a chainsaw, (I'm thinking of killing the girl?)

You should do more of suspense! You could go with her listening chainsaw person approaching and she tries to hide somewhere, like dead bodies. The person starts chainsaw cutting channels and blood and guts to spill on his face. She can not take anymore and screams. After the scream, the chainsaw person knows where and then kills it, or we will run away and she is tormented by it.

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